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Friday, April 28, 2017

What is the Goal?

The goal is writing text that doesn't have glaring errors. Can you spot the glaring errors below?

Look at the red squares!

Here are the answers:
A North Liberty man is accused of sexually abusing several four young boys when he served as a mentor and youth leader for a local church. According to North Liberty police criminal complaints, Benjamin C. Tweedt, now 32, had at four victims. Police first learned about the allegations in Feburary.
1) use the word “four” in the opening paragraph.
2) remove the word “at” that is between “had” and “four”
3) change Feburary to February

Editor's Note: This article can be found at http://www.thegazette.com/subject/news/public-safety/north-liberty-man-accused-of-fondling-young-boys-20170427).

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